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No thorns could form a lesser crown
This pain I feel for you
Every inch becomes a mile
I walk my life without you
A cross far too heavy, far too wide
I think I will leave it now
To join you in our paradise.

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The following comments are for "No thorns"
by Gordon

jeez Gordon
This isn't one of my favourites of yours Gordon .. just too dismal for it to be endearing or impressive .. or .. whatever .. never like the down side of poems so don't take it personally.

( Posted by: Pen [Member] On: March 20, 2011 )

think your right pen
Yea I know dont think I should have posted this far to throw away and weak.
Better try harder next time lol
Thanks for the honesty.

( Posted by: Gordon [Member] On: March 20, 2011 )

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