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Author's Note:
Seeing my friends here again motivated me to show off one machinima I made of one of my old poems. Here is the link to my Reverberation poem:

crystal face I kiss
tongue tastes like sweet cold rain
I fall into pond

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The following comments are for "Reverberation - A Poetry Machinima"

of Machinima added dimension

It's good to have your Voice here.


( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: March 15, 2011 )

Twin B?
Good stuff, I couldl ounge around all day thinking about nothing just watching and listening to stuff like this.

Your avatar is vaguely familiar, are you related to someone here?

( Posted by: veebdosa [Member] On: March 15, 2011 )

Crystal Image

We used to call it A "Face Plant" usually done when inebriated.....Never hurt falling into those frozen puddles.....till the next morning

Yes Peter you look familiar to me... Maybe from when I used to sign in as Goody-Two-Shoes (or whatever) or maybe in Richmond ?....nahhh it was on MSN of course. Nice to see you still have the link and hope all is well with you and yours

Of course Davie's are on MSN Skype Facebook etc if you ever get bored just Buzz me or Ivor...


( Posted by: Fairplay [Member] On: March 15, 2011 )

Bobby, Veebdosa, and Eric: Thank you for the nice comments. I just thought I could share one of my poetry machinima here, if I couldn't stay here for very long. You three are very kind to look at it and say what's in your mind about it, very much appreciated.

I know Eric has a brother here, and that's Ivor Davies. I wish I had a relative here too, but then I should be just as happy to have found a few friends here.

Oh yeah, Eric, we did chat at MSN sometime ago hehe!!! It was nice talking to you then! You did prove you are a real person behind the poet Fairplay! Hey, have you seen the movie Catfish? It's one good movie.

( Posted by: PETERPAULINO [Member] On: March 16, 2011 )

I did not know about Catfish. Having caught and my family and friends consumed a couple tons of catfish, my imagination runs the gauntlet of what a Catfish move might be, I have imagined it all.

My guess is that this huge, monstrous Mississippi river catfish is terrorizing Memphis until the big one hits the New Madrid fault and consmes most of the Mid-western US.

I got a couple other ideas, but they are not as dramatic.

I used worms and chicken guts.

( Posted by: veebdosa [Member] On: March 16, 2011 )


Must be age related but novel type films to me are like "eye-candy" as in walking down the street. Most things are worth a glance. I never have time to wait for the "Punch-line" and unless a film can grab my attention from the "Get-Go" I soon lose interest and switch Channels. Catfish would not be a title to "Grab my attention" which proves advertising works.... now you have mentioned Catfish I will look up the trailers etc to see what it is all about....

I think it was mentioned here on Lit recently the "City Life Mentality (CLM) people walking round pooh faced eyes to the front ..... definitely no eye contact with strangers. Whereas I seem to be the exact opposite (Maybe being ex forces) I see to anyone...Make a point of looking open eyed at everyone and instantly categorizing all... friend/foe safe/unsafe attractive/ugly I am the sort of chap that never ever steps in Dog Pooh...... The last movie I went to watch in a cinema was a decade ago.. It must have been Pre-Historic because I got a megasoreass having to sit so long through it and was thoroughly bored. It convinced me to watch future Movies at home where I can switch channels.

Regarding fish and the sea I saw Hardtalk yesterday on TV I was quite surprised that the Old lady being interviewed (a Seanaut the downward version of astronaut) informed us more than 60% of the oxygen on this planet is replenished by what lives and grows in the sea……. And we are destroying it…

Now I must check regarding the above comment by “Ron Wilson” if the Catfish is to have its revenge!

( Posted by: Fairplay [Member] On: March 16, 2011 )



What on earth has the title got to do with it

Maybe the Cat / Fish connection... now I am laughing at Ron saying he used worms and Chicken guts to catch his.......

However it’s often hard to trust your own eyes let alone the cyber world.... I can imagine the film will be educational for some (claimed to be factual too!) must get round to watching the trailer..... The only movie I have seen early PC days was "You Got Mail" which was the happy ever after type.


( Posted by: Fairplay [Member] On: March 16, 2011 )

Only in words
Your wish is my command. though you might find the new poem kind of mediocre and shallow, I still tried lu. hope you like it. Soon it will be up on the front page.

Are you getting all your poems published that you took them all away here? Please let me know, I am going to buy a copy, or maybe copies. ;-)

( Posted by: PETERPAULINO [Member] On: May 16, 2011 )

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