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BESTEST FRIEND
All I'll ever be is who I've been.
If I change a thing, it's only now and then.
There's still a little boy in me.
You can find him anytime you want to see.
He'll hold your hand, and he'll understand
the feeling you've been going through.
When you need a friend
He will be the bestest friend you ever knew.

All you'll ever know in knowing me.
Is someone who'll love you like love's meant to be.
I've seen the little girl in you,
I know she loves all the little things I do.
She could warm my heart, or tear it apart,
And she might do it with a grin.
But when I need a friend,
she will be the bestest friend there's ever been.

Picture your life
walking down a country lane
Never caring where you will go.
Picture yourself
Walking with your bestest friend,
Always knowing you're not alone.

All I'll ever give is all you see.
If I changed too much, you could never find me.
I'm still the little boy I've been,
Not long ago, he still comes out now and then.
He will hold your hand,
And he'll understand the feeling you can never show.
And when you need a friend,
He will be the bestest friend you'll ever know.


------
VeeBdosa
Fort Knox, KY


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The following comments are for "Bestest Friend"
by veebdosa

little boy
very sweet ron...enjoyed

( Posted by: cmsmuse [Member] On: March 9, 2011 )

Friends
I like the metaphor of the little boy in you going along with the title. I questioned the it in my head before reading and was very pleasantly surprised.

There were a few lines that when I tried to put them to music in my head, there was an extra word or two causing me to rush it a bit. However, not knowing the music in your head, its hard to give a good critque of a song...

Either way, great stuff! I really liked this one.

Much Love,

Dave

( Posted by: HeRoCoMpLeX [Member] On: March 13, 2011 )

Ron's little boy.
Here's to the little boy/girl in all of us!

Ron this was precious..in the nicest way of course. It's when we lose that side of us, that we become cynical, jaded adults.

Bea



( Posted by: Beatrice Boyle [Member] On: March 14, 2011 )

The Song
Ok, it is a song, and you can hear it at

http://vbdosa.com

and then click on the link///
CLICK THIS LINK TO LISTEN TO BESTEST FRIEND.

( Posted by: VEEBDOSA [Member] On: March 14, 2011 )





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