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You were no virgin and i rant at you
the action from your demeanor
Steal my style and my very virtue
Covered in urine and disguise
We will wait and take it easy

Ahhh ahhh ahh, i Kiss your face in Sleepiness
You stare and put contacts in and witness
my very disguise
walk me from this triage
the end is of bagpipes and old liquor

The end is like bondage porn and orgasms
Heroin and acid to the depths of reality
my words of spoken creations
the filth of the very variations
certain Christ has been lonely

Times we have all been apart
My life is like Archimedes
Great mathematician to where we laugh so far apart
We are only Archimedes
Genius to our own mankind

Ahhh ahhh ahh i kiss your face in Sleepiness
Pray to Greek gods and urinate on this wall.
Oh pray and urinate on this wall...
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The following comments are for "Greek gods are Genius"
by NucleusFire

Um
Um this is quite interesting to read enjoyed reading it well written.

( Posted by: literature [Member] On: March 2, 2011 )

Gods
A heavy handed and lurid bit of versifying. KInda like the hit em in the gut style - works!
Thanks

( Posted by: jonpenny [Member] On: March 2, 2011 )

Good Feedback
Thank you for reading, I really enjoy moments of raw writing and find out what happens.

best,

Chris

( Posted by: NucleusFire [Member] On: March 22, 2011 )





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