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THE DOOMSDAY SONG
Walkin down the street,
when outa the blue
the Devil told me something
I'm gonna share with you
Best get your sinning in,
if you got some sinning left to do
It's all over! We're all gonna die.
It's all over.

Walkin down the street,
When out of the blue
Your girlfriend told me something
I'm gonna share with you.
Best get your loving in
If you got some loving here to do.
It's all over! We're all gonna die.
It's all over!

Walkin down the street
When outa the blue
Sweet Jesus told me something
I'm, gonna share with you
Best get your praying in
If you got some praying left to do.
It's all over! We're all gonna die!
It's all over!
It's all over! We're all gonna die!
Hollywood Beach, FL
02/27/2011 rev

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VeeBdosa
Fort Knox, KY


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The following comments are for "The Doomsday Song rev"
by veebdosa

Sin, Love and Redemption
Ron,

Now this really is a recipe for a good life! Enjoyed it and might just take your advice....

Ivor

( Posted by: ivordavies [Member] On: March 1, 2011 )

Repent with your last breath




It was going well for me till the last verse


Walkin down the street
When outa the blue
Saint Nick told me something
I'm, gonna share with you
Best get your sinning in
If you got some sinning left to do.
It's all over! We're all gonna die!
It's all over!
It's all over! We're all gonna die!

( Posted by: Fairplay [Member] On: March 1, 2011 )

Gonna die
Has the feel of an old timey gospel, could even hear it expanded. I liked it!

( Posted by: jonpenny [Member] On: March 9, 2011 )





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