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A MILE OF YOU (Feb Song Challange)(time slips away)
I'm not me.
I'm just who you want me to be.
If time slips away on me an you
What we gonna do? Where we goin to?

Give me an inch
I'll take me a mile.
Tease me beat me Make me smile.
Make every mile I'm going through
worth goin through.

If time slips away, what we gonna do?
I'll just keep right on pumpin you.
Humpin you Pumpin you.
I'll take a mile a mile a mile
another mile of you

When --- time slips away---
I'll be done with you.
Done with you.

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VeeBdosa
Fort Knox, KY


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