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Underestimated titillation
not caused by
fingers,lips or other.
No body heat
will release me
like words.
Write them or
Speak them
in shallow whispers.
Pierce my being and
penetrate my mind.
These longings
require no restraints
just stimulation
of the verbal kind.


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I am on a journey. Looking for Me. Everyday I get a little closer. The more time goes by the more I realize I'm always changing. This journey could take forever... Renae L. Soler


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The following comments are for "Verbal Stimulation"
by nae411

penetrated
Ah, Nae, the more things change the more they stay the same. And we're all the better for it. You always stimulate with your words. You steamy little pixie, you.

***

BTW, wow! I've never seen so many posts in one day. A good sign if ever there was one.

( Posted by: toscano [Member] On: February 18, 2011 )

of manipulation..
Renae,
Indeed..

Keep up the bad work.

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: February 18, 2011 )

Toscano and Bobby...
Toscano... I like that "Steamy little pixie" oh so fairy -ish! Thank you!

Bobby, I don't know if it is my fingers or this keyboard but I keep writing "Booby" instead of "Bobby" LOL... Thank you for stopping by and checking out my bad work!

Hugs,
Nae

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: February 18, 2011 )

stimulate those brain cells
nae

non erotic poetry at its erotic best- you haven't missed a beat- missed your juicy poetry...


my warmest
bob

( Posted by: TheRedCockRoach [Member] On: February 18, 2011 )

Nae!
Absolutely loved this Nae...being in love becomes you!

You'd make the phone book sound sexy!

Don't ever go away again!!!!

Bea

( Posted by: Beatrice Boyle [Member] On: February 18, 2011 )

Bob and Bea...
Thank you Bob! I don't know what it is about words that excite me so much! Love it!

Hey Bea, Being in LOVE is incredible! I am so happy! And wow even the phone book huh????

I am not going any where my friend! I am loving being home!

Hugs!
Nae

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: February 18, 2011 )

good on ya Nae
as you stated .. there most definitely is a difference .. still you but .. um .. more sophisticated? satiated?

Enjoyed this a lot Nae. :-)

( Posted by: Pen [Member] On: February 18, 2011 )

Enjoyed
Enjoyed reading this. Thank you.

( Posted by: MattS [Member] On: February 19, 2011 )

titillating words
A very unique perspective to define the power of words. It leaves my mind open to a lot of different angles on how language, itself has some kind of power over us. Your first lines draw a more sensual connection, as a physical association with the words. That is unique because I think we (humans) naturally take words in for their emotional meaning first, and pay little attention to the other senses that we could use to absorb the words (language). It is cliche to say "listen with your heart." But it is still appropriate to use that concept in communication. Maybe we could learn to listen with your eyes, hear with our nose, understand with our touch.

Very nice

BW

( Posted by: BWOz [Member] On: February 19, 2011 )

Nice
Nae it sounds like your getting it lol took a long time girl Nice
G.

( Posted by: Gordon [Member] On: February 19, 2011 )

Thank you!
Pen, I like "satiated", so I will take it! Thank you for reading.

Thank you MattS.

Lucie you are a hoot! Yes I guess all that stuff works too! Reading to me seems to be the most seductive form of all. I have no idea why but it drives me insane!!

BW, there is a lot to be said about "understanding with our touch" I think that might be one of the most precise ways of all! I was rereading comments on my older posts the other day and I was surprised as to how many I had from you. Your comments are always so intuitive. Thank you for that!

Gordon, my dear so nice to see you around these parts again!

Nae

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: February 21, 2011 )

Stay satiated!
I agree with Bob. It's sort of intellectual eroticism. I love the alliterative sound of the first line.

( Posted by: poeteye [Member] On: February 23, 2011 )

I meow
as I blurbed in the G thread
Elle s'est imbibée de toute la beauté qui l'entourait.
She drank in all the beauty surrounding her.

I don't know how to say it in Spanish, but...

I am reading all your poetry, and drinking in your energies, -
and despite my usual indifference to blondes, i still find myself fantasizing about that golden mane cradled in my nurturing bosom. Darling.

--
 /l、
(゚、 。 7
 l、 ~ヽ
 じしf_, )ノ

mwuah for Tosco.
For you - Meow.

( Posted by: VickieSALT [Member] On: April 4, 2011 )

poeteye and Tori
Thank you poeteye! I will do my best to stay satiated!

Tori, Ha ha... flattery will get you every where, wink. Seriously, thank you for taking the time to read me. Energies can be an amazing thing for sure.

Nae ;0)

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: April 5, 2011 )





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