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_Don't Call Me_ 
 
Don't call me. 
I don't want to hear it. 
My phone is switched off. 
I'm not listening. 
I've heard it all before. 
Just leave me alone. 
 
Just leave me alone. 
 
Just leave me. 
 
Just leave. 
 
Just... 
 
Come on. Why don't you call? 
 


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Spudley Strikes Again
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The following comments are for "Don't Call Me"
by Spudley

Interesting!!
This was very interesting Spud. Surprising, coming from a male!! It's as if you were inside a woman's head, expressing how SHE feels. Right on target! (By the way, did she ever call??)

( Posted by: Beatrice Boyle [Member] On: June 18, 2003 )

reply to Bea...
Thanks for that Beatrice.... :-D

Actually, this one is an experiment. It isn't actually my own thoughts....

I'm writing a novel, and part of that means trying to get inside the heads of the characters.

In this case, the character is a woman, and this is her thoughts, as I pictured them.

I haven't written any convincing female characters before... but if your response is anything to go by, it sounds like I might be on the right track this time. :-)

( Posted by: Spudley [Member] On: June 18, 2003 )

Ring! Ring!
Ring! Ring! Pick up spud you poems rock.

( Posted by: lovesessence [Member] On: August 10, 2003 )





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