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For the things you will teach me,
And the things I will learn.
For all the things Iíll do,
That will fill you with concern.

I canít wait for you to tell me,
About the places you have been.
Iím looking forward to meeting you,
Iím the child youíve not yet seen.

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The following comments are for "The child youíve not yet seen"
by man eating maniac


As an expectant father this piece touched a nerve, seeming to come from the lips of an unborn child. Good work, keem 'em coming.

( Posted by: Bartleby [Member] On: June 18, 2003 )

This remindes me of my mother in law. She didn't meet her birth father till she was in her 20 or early 30's.
I love this poem.

( Posted by: DolphinRose [Member] On: August 14, 2003 )

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