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over a thick haze
of exhaled breaths
crowds throb

surging
in and out of
alarming lights

sunk
relentless rudiments
rattle their heels

above
single-minded

syncopated riffs
peel through the haze
with pensive wings

among crowds
I menace the stage

sanguine
young

wishing
soaring
imagining

I would be
the fifth player
quietly dressed
along side them

performing
like it was
the end


-pablowilliams 12/23/09
Revised 2/5/11

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"Some people never go crazy. What truly horrible lives they must lead." Charles Bukowski


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The following comments are for "The Show (Revised)"
by pablowilliams

Abel's "Show"
I read as, "alongside them"


perform on..

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: February 7, 2011 )

Show
Yep! That's how it is!!!

( Posted by: jonpenny [Member] On: February 8, 2011 )

oops...
Bobby, humbly noted- thank you.

Lucie- a memorable night; 'Dredg' was the band I was watching perform. I am glad you enjoyed it.

Ken- the music man; you know what's up!

Thank you all.

( Posted by: pablowilliams [Member] On: February 8, 2011 )





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