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on we sings with severed toes
twisted wings and other things
we crawl slides and hides
in your hairy thighs well worn lies
and bug assed eyes
we fight bite sting and stink
lick suck fu*k and drink

to make you bleed so we can eat and feed
on your tainted sacred seed

it’s what we need…


Note: a beastie poem for bea






------
nature weeps, the devil sings
at man’s greed and pride
and what it brings

just lots of useless
little things…

"He was the brightest of all the stars
of heaven, and even ripped and torn
in half, he still shone with a fire of a
billion suns. With a mighty roar
and a Big Bang, he imploded and
exploded out of the nothingness; and
the flow of Time began.”


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The following comments are for "Beastie Seeds"
by TheRedCockroach

of "Beasties"
indeed.

bloody buggers..

salute

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: January 30, 2011 )

Old Home Week!
OK...now it's official...Bob Collaci is in the house!!!

The damn beasties are on the prowl again!

Pen, Bob and Chrispian all in the same week...hold on to your hats...Lit is on the move again!

( Posted by: Beatrice Boyle [Member] On: January 30, 2011 )

hot damn
So glad to see you here again Bob!

( Posted by: Pen [Member] On: January 30, 2011 )

Beastie
Terrific piece! Bob and Pen lovely to have you back.

( Posted by: jonpenny [Member] On: February 1, 2011 )

lots of useless little things
Bob,

Another writer back who lives outside the box! Just went back to read your stuff, seems you beat me to my latest posted sentiment.....

Love the first part of your signature:

"nature weeps, the devil sings
at man’s greed and pride
and what it brings

just lots of useless
little things…"

keep plastering the boards.....

Ivor


Ivor

( Posted by: ivordavies [Member] On: February 3, 2011 )

Beasties
I love me beasties- will continue to write them until my writing bones dry up- I did change this a bit but editing it while it's still on page one gets to be a problem-

it's now



Thank you all for remembering my beloved and nasty little beasties... those human ones can suck the life out of you...



my warmest
bob

( Posted by: TheRedCockRoach [Member] On: February 6, 2011 )

beastie redo
for some reason my edit disappeared..

here it is

-on we sings with severed wings
twisted toes and other things-


sorry

bob

( Posted by: TheRedCockRoach [Member] On: February 6, 2011 )

of seeds and needs..
Back for more..



ciao

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: February 6, 2011 )





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