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lying in the grass, in each others arms
two lost in the magic of dusk
I looked into your eyes, then we both knew
we could never touch enough

but before we could fall deeper into
you left without a word to me
how could we go from desire and love
to consummate agony


romance began with your first stolen kiss
then heartache born of denial and lies
you had no problem saying hello
but when you left, you never said good bye


with your smiling embrace dark and gone
I let you go and walk away
with your every step, the space increased
and so did my longing and pain


romance began with your first stolen kiss
then heartache born of denial and lies
you had no problem saying hello
but when you left, you never said good bye


if it meant so much, why do you regret it so?
if there was passion, why did you let it go?


I canít believe your memories arenít sweet
when I opened my soul to you
you vanished as quickly as you came
unaware of the girl you slew


romance began with your first stolen kiss
then heartache born of denial and lies
you had no problem saying hello
but when you left, you never said good bye


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The following comments are for "you never said good bye"
by cmsmuse

re: You never said goodbye
What type of music accompanies these lyrics?
Very nice! Thanks for posting....

( Posted by: JETFIREk [Member] On: January 26, 2011 )

good bye
thanks judy...
unfortunately i am not a musician, just a lyricist. I have had some lyrics set to music by friends, but nothing serious yet. someday maybe.

( Posted by: cmsmuse [Member] On: January 26, 2011 )

come on melody...
I really like this, but am having a little trouble fitting a tune to it right now, I think is cool and made for a melody to fit right in. I still trying this afternoon...

( Posted by: veebdosa [Member] On: January 26, 2011 )

Love it Tina!
I've heard this story many times...sad but true!
Cowards always steal away like a thief in the night!

Bea

( Posted by: Beatrice Boyle [Member] On: January 26, 2011 )





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