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He told me it would never work 
our love would never be the same 
now I'm wondering what to do 
why does he kiss her, yet his eyes scream my name 
 
i haunt myself by that simple kiss 
stolen for hours in time 
he knows my heart, forever his 
when will his finally be mine? 
 
Things I should not have done are past 
too few moments to even last 
the little girl he used to know 
grew up now, he's enjoying the show 
 
Who put the evil thoughts in the others head? 
Already broken his heart said 
and yet I want fix it up,  
Put back the peices where they belong 
play him a lovely love song 
 
I was broken before, but now I'm used 
Dirty on the floor, don't know what to do 
Should I wait here until he comes back again? 
My best lover, my only friend? 
 
 
I. Nicole New ~ 6-16-03 9:02am, est. This is to the one I did love, do love and always will love; may he find happieness...and may his broken heart be minded.

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If I did it...I didn't mean to.
If I hurt you...I didn't mean to.
If I left you...I didn't mean to.
If I scared you...I didn't mean to.
If I loved you...I didn't mean to.


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