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A potion of love mixed with air
Our bed in the space of nowhere
His magnetic force connected to mine
Heartbeats and breaths creating new time
His song is melodic a place I shall linger
As he strokes my secrets with his soft finger
Almost in Heaven above the world
I love his way of showing I'm his chosen girl
Vows passed and paradise starts
With the harmonious rhythms of two love birds hearts
Nothing can stop what we have already started
We will love hard until we are dearly departed
Intimacy rains as our insides swell
Another episode of a place where we shall dwell

Everything I do, I do with passion. Come join me and see what I can do with words!

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The following comments are for "GRAVITY"
by DBurke

Love abounds
I'm at a loss for words, but 'sweet' comes to mind. Thank you for sharing.

( Posted by: pablowilliams [Member] On: January 22, 2011 )

sweet indeed
I'm less of a fan of this but don't take it as a critique .. please! Just never was one to get worked up over love poems unless they are incredibly unique.

( Posted by: Pen [Member] On: February 1, 2011 )

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