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You have found your way home,
As I knew you would.
Iíve been standing here patiently,
Just as I should.
Ready and willing,
To welcome you back.
And to make everything bright
Where once it was black.
Iím standing on the dock,
Your present is all set.
You will whisper that you missed me,
And my eyes will be wet.
I missed you too, Iíll say,
As I hold you close.
But we havenít got long,
So letís make the most.
Tomorrow you sail again,
Once more from my life.
When you return, I promise
That I will be your wife.



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