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Iir: so, who are you?

???: just a follower of the path of the reasoning.. Claire Light is the name..

Iir: where are we?

Claire Light: did you hit your head? anyway, you should forget your chaotic ways and follow the path of reasoning..

Iir: why should i?

Claire Light: look, this is one of the many blessings of the path of reasoning..

Iir: ...

Claire Light: ...

Iir: not impressive.

Claire Light: there is nothing to this, just passing and forgetting, hear the voice of the patient calm of silence and the blessings will develop themselves.. death represents no impediment to those that follow the path of the sacred reasoning for they will live forever, for reason blesses soul and body.

Iir: define live?

Claire Light: are you a chaotic agent? are you in league with the chaos?

Iir: now that sounds much better... you should use it in your sales pitch... chaos sure beats the hell out of the path of reasoning... the name is kind of lame you know...


Iir: but reason can only stray if unreason is the rule... if chaos is the law should not reasoning be chaos... does that not make reason subject to the reasoner?

Claire Light: you are just trying to confuse me for your devious plans, you demon!!! what is it you want?

Iir: i want? i want... i want to build...

Claire Light: the sacred path of reasoning allows to build.. numbers and patterns.. put togheter in harmony to create..

Iir: ...numbers are only as important as what they measure... besides i am not looking to build anything outside...

Claire Light: then what are you looking for?

Iir: for the measure of 1...

Claire Light: well, 1 is a whole.

Iir: right, but a whole of what?

Claire Light: whatever you are describing.

Iir: right again... that is what im looking for, that something that is one...

Claire Light: there are a lot of books about a lot of things at the palace, you should come with me.. maybe you will find what you are looking for there..

Iir: maybe... did you say palace? is there any food in there, i am starving...

Claire Light: i bet you did not know.. im a great cook!!, we will just make a small detour and go to my place.. my family will love to meet you, you will all get along just fine and you will have time to get to know eachother while i cook..

Iir: get to know eachother?

Claire Light: Shhhhh do not make a fuss out of it and walk.. is really, really close.. beside to get to the palace is a 2 month trip..

from all that was,
to all, that is,
the end

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