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Love is fire and ice
The hot blooded passion
can make the coldest nights
feel like a day in the tropics.
With your lover's arms around you
the world melts away
leaving just the fire.

Equally it is cold as ice
smooth to the touch
though too cold to hold
and when betrayed
shatters like glass
and near impossible
to piece back together.

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if the pen is mighter then the sword then the word processer must be mighter then the missile


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by johntellall

Fire & Ice LUV
johntellall....I think you told it all...very nice...

( Posted by: JetfireK [Member] On: January 4, 2011 )





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