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rooftops towers
blood bone and concrete
a moment to remember


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nature weeps, the devil sings
at man’s greed and pride
and what it brings

just lots of useless
little things…

"He was the brightest of all the stars
of heaven, and even ripped and torn
in half, he still shone with a fire of a
billion suns. With a mighty roar
and a Big Bang, he imploded and
exploded out of the nothingness; and
the flow of Time began.”


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The following comments are for "wingless"
by TheRedCockroach

..below radar
before taking
leap of faith
it's best to pack
parachute


Happy 2011
Salute

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: January 1, 2011 )

:)
Clever. The two of you- very nice. Thank you for sharing!

( Posted by: pablowilliams [Member] On: January 2, 2011 )

free falling..
again.

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: January 30, 2011 )





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