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I plunged my hand
into a burning bush.
I heard no sound
and felt no pain,
found no lines
or lights a ‘shine.
Nothing there a’ tall.

-Al Zeller

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The following comments are for "Atheist"
by r1067r

Quo Vadis?
Great thought provoking, and brief poem that really fits into our national environment today, unfortunately. How do we awaken the sleeping Giant called America? How do we restore our beginning dream called America? Not easy, huh?

Maybe this poem you have done is more important than we might realize at first reading, I think it is a great poem. That is because it stirred in myself the thought that while you felt nothing, absolutely nothing, does not mean that God did not feel you.

It just means you did not feel Him, ... yet.

( Posted by: VeeBdosa [Member] On: December 28, 2010 )

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