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days are dead
with no words

evenings alone
sword sheathed

rivers crack
insane with old heat

a glow recedes
into wasted ink
eventually fire

the leaves they
fall inside me

marked
aberrant steps
move slow units of blood
retorting Gods hand
into an earthly void
of supposed growth

fledgling thoughts
mount the slow-light

godly flames take
Midwest exits

stranded lads
wonder
bouncing around
in heaps of
hand-less laughter

my words
finally found



- pablowilliams





------
"Some people never go crazy. What truly horrible lives they must lead." Charles Bukowski


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The following comments are for "No Use (Version)"
by pablowilliams

No Use
Found indeed! Good one!

( Posted by: jonpenny [Member] On: December 23, 2010 )

a comment
punctuation is your friend. Even the great man used it when it was needed.

( Posted by: bhagwandave [Member] On: December 28, 2010 )





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