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Invisibility

Walk passed unseeing eyes

Talk to non-hearing ears

I'M FREAKING INVISIBLE!

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Kacee Huggs


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The following comments are for "Today (my first Naani)"
by Nitz Kitty

Far from it Kacee!
THAT my dear...you are NOT!

Glad to see you are trying new forms again...we've missed you...soo happy you are back!

Merry Christmas!

Bea

( Posted by: Beatrice Boyle [Member] On: December 18, 2010 )

Never
Kacee... you are definitely not invisible and your words are seen and heard loud and clear as well. Missed reading you dear friend!

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: December 18, 2010 )

She's Invisible.....
Yes...she is invisible...but her writings are bold underlined.....Loved it....THANKS

( Posted by: JetfireK [Member] On: December 19, 2010 )

Seeing Kacee
Good to find you experimenting again..
The Kaceeisms of five/six years ago remain classics.

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: December 19, 2010 )

WOW!
I hadn't checked lit for awhile and was amazed to find some old friends and a new friend commenting and even giving me an exceptional rating....Thank you all. I missed being at lit.

My muse had been dormant for a long time and was suddenly aroused by the realization that my family ignores me as if I am invisible...I needed to rant and what better way than to put into some form of poetry...My old friends know I love to challenge myself at times with different forms of poetry...and so here I am again...Don't know when my muse will rise up again...I hope soon. Kacee

( Posted by: nitz kitty [Member] On: December 19, 2010 )

Chris
Thanks for checking in on me and for the great rating...Kacee

( Posted by: nitz kitty [Member] On: December 20, 2010 )

hello Kaycee!
Lovely to see you here again! Read your post on Bea's rules poem and came here to have a read. You know, me writing poetry is pretty much ho hum for the closest members of my family which is totally okay.

When I read this I thought about the musings I've read from older women who feel invisible .. that always surprised me .. can't say as I ever feel this way .. but .. I'll keep you posted.

( Posted by: Pen [Member] On: February 6, 2011 )

Thanking 2 more...
Pen and Lucie...Don't know when my muse will visit me again...She keeps taking vacations and leaving me behind...Thanks for checking in on me...

( Posted by: Nitz Kitty [Member] On: March 12, 2011 )





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