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I hope I have a place in you
Where things grow sweet and tall
Where you come sometimes when you're quiet and alone
And you still feel what we were
That what we were in this place in you
We will always be
And anytime you need a friend
You'll come and remember me.


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The following comments are for "A Place In You"
by nativeokie

place
this is very sweet...enjoyed!

( Posted by: cmsmuse [Member] On: December 15, 2010 )

a place in you...
Thanks...uplifting.....

( Posted by: JetfireK [Member] On: December 15, 2010 )

cmsmuse and JetfireK
Thank you both so much.

( Posted by: nativeokie [Member] On: December 16, 2010 )

Place in You
I liked this...you made crisp and fresh what could easily end up being Hallmarky. Very nice.

( Posted by: jonpenny [Member] On: December 17, 2010 )





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