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wind dance snow dust
oil orange sky
pink chapped horizon rime
eyes closed
against the cold

pepermint dry hollow mouth
candle waver heart
march used brass hymns
feet stern
on silver cobbles

dream ribbons dream tinsel

husks only choke

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I blog irregularly at TinkerX. I'm also on Twitter. @andyhavens, go figure.


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by andyhavens

of wind-dancing snow dust
Andy,
Enjoyed experience..

Happy Christmas

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: December 18, 2010 )





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