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One great man,yet not seen
Workplace;i know but not been
Crafts mightly with holy palm
His great work,even i,i am.

All craftmen but a craftman
All statue but he made man
He works yet thanks for wage
Created us in his blessed image

I marvel at what i see
Land for trees;bowl for sea
Air for life;earth,our haven
The craftman who art in heaven

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oomph!


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The following comments are for "The Rare Craftman"
by zaza

"Craftsman"
Did you make word, "craftman"..by intent?

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: December 13, 2010 )

Craft s man
I loved the intent but fumbled with word choices. This almost deserves more - the richness of the Craftsman motif could be a metaphor rich landscape. I loved the creation/nature references. Thanks

( Posted by: jonpenny [Member] On: December 13, 2010 )

ignorantly
bobby, thanks 4 ur correction. That's a big omission. I appreciate

( Posted by: zaza [Member] On: December 14, 2010 )





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