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First meeting of all.
Plants were absent.
It was a cloudy day.
Lightening introducing thunder.
The heaven were ready for
the earth for forty days.

To get in, cheetah first.
It nearly drenched the snail.
Snake sneaked into the ark.
Limited necks- giraffe et al.
Mosquito?where went Noah?
Male and female, earthworm?

Headache! The parrot's presence.
Dogs cross-bred in there.
The alarm - the cock crow.
Noah built an aquarium
for swimming creatures.
Sanitation officer,bravo!

Had it rained this day,
Who will be the 'Noah'?
It would be an aircraft.
The wild animals tamed.
All would have been in
either by hook or crook.

------
oomph!


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The following comments are for "Genesis 7 verse 9"
by zaza

Noah's Ark.
Very clever...a new perspective on Noah's Ark!

Bea

( Posted by: Beatrice Boyle [Member] On: December 11, 2010 )





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