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when the sun wakes up
We start fight for top.
But when time is night
Then,rest is made right.

When my very eyes closes
Then,man surely, doses
Birds fly to their nest.
It's right time for rest.

A day shall surely,come.
When man shall be dumb.
Man dead in his entirety.
It's a rest till eternity.


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