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Is this the way people suffer their days...
Is this the way LOVE turns to be?
Is this the way they promised they won’t ever leave?
Is this the way LOVE turns to be?
Those years, those days passed
And nothing is what they left behind
Nothing is the word...
Nothing is what you are asking for...
Then never come begging me back...
Because the days that passed are gone...
The way I used to forgive is done...
The ink I wrote with your name is fading away...
The scar you left in my heart is healing...
And your love dried in my veins...like never before…
I forgot the way we used to touch ...
The way how my hand used to fit in yours ...
The way we used to kiss...
All the papers you wrote your love on are burned...
To ashes they returned...
Like everything before...
Like our love never used to be in this world...
Like we never ever came close even once
Like our eyes never met at a glance...
Like our hearts never felt LOVE at all...
Like our blood never boiled before...
The way a blank page is left to be ...
That's what our love seems to me...
Two years of my life are denied...
And a day in each month is deled...
Is it the sixteenth what it used to be?
Why do I have fate forgetting you?
Forgetting the way you look
The way you smiled at me once
And hold me real tight
The way you used to dry out my tears
Why am I even trying to do this?
Is it because a day you just forgot?
Someone was still waiting at the end
at the end of a story that never had the title for the end
was it just that you have missed a day?
And slept without thinking of a way
a way to end a story with no end
was it that you never reached a thought?
Or your love just turned cold
was it the way someone drove you away?
Away with no choice
No choice of a return...
Is this the way LOVE turns to be?
Turns to be a way you want to forget
And just move ahead
Leaving a story with no end...
Is this the way you wanted to be?
Are you thinking about my end?
Cause it would be so easy just like a fairytale
About the beast leaving the beauty at the dance...
About the prince leaving Cinderella with no shoes...
The way Snow White never woke up...
Is this what you are looking for?
Or are you just being blind?
With not even a look around ...
Driven away with a road to forget your pain
The pain that never goes away
All the promises you've made
And the LOVE you have met ...
Does that thing makes you smile?
Or even enjoy your time?
Tell me...
Does it get you through your day?
Does it heal your pain away?
And let you laugh again ...
Does it make you feel alive?
Or is it just another game?!
Is this the way LOVE turns to be?
Is this the way that YOU are free?
Or you are just faking it real...
Why is it true that you did leave?
Why do I have to take that pain?
And remember alone what used to be...
Why is it a way that you always run away?
And put the blame on me...
Why do you always judge my words?
And never set me free...
When it comes real you leave the world and scream
Regret the days you stayed far
and that you said good-bye
Fill the world with your tears
and hug me so I believe.
But after it's all healed
you replay the whole scene...
Till...
My heart never beats.
Is this the way LOVE turns to be?
Forget the passion and the tears
Take a look back and see
What happened along the years
And to our letters on the trees
That were drawn by my keys
Upon a quite building our secrets are kept
And on a hard road our laughs are saved
On a short stair our love rests
And on each wall our memories are still there
Is this the way LOVE turns to be?
How easy to fear...
No one can hear or even feel
What I have been through those years
Upon a shooting star my wish is released
Once upon a time he was here...
He used to fill my world with cheers
I wish I can replay the scenes
Watch the way I used to play my tricks
And the way we used to hide
Away from all the sights
Cause that was the way he liked it to be
I remember the days I made you laugh
The way how you used to be my life
The way you blink when you are by my side
And all the words you ever said
The nights we both cried
And the pain we always had
Is this the way LOVE turns to be?
That easy to forget
Forget the nights we stayed up late
And the rainy days that got us wet
How we used to wait for the sunset
The days when you were by my side
And the days you made me cry
Why do you want to leave all this behind?
And make it look just like dust
why do you pretend that you don't care?
Is it that you want me to forget?
is that fair?!
Call it the way you like...
I can be the wind that blows all the memories away
It is not just that I am sad...
I am falling apart...
Is it the way I miss?
Your sight that I never meet…
And your voice that I never hear
Your heart that never beat
The way you used to be mine
And the way I hated your lies
Your letters that I never received
The way I made you mad
The way I used to be by your side
The road we walked at night
The way I feel your love
The kiss that makes me cry
The words you always say
The way you sleep all the day
The way you laugh at me
And the stories you never told me
The way you used to hold me
The kiss you send me when you say good-bye
Your winks that almost made me fly
The way you are always late
And I always wait
The days you never called me at all
How jealous you used to be
All the pictures I tore
The way you called me your angel...
And the way I always denied the fact
The times I felt shy...
The way no one knows at all
Why do I even recall?
All those days that passed
When you are not a bit near
You never tell me the way you feel
I know your hope disappeared
But what does it have to do with me
Is this the way LOVE turns to be?
Why do you even think?
That I never care at all...
But you don't even know...
The way I spend the whole night long
Thinking of you and the way we belong
I don't even know...
The way I’m going to fall...
Your love wakes me at night
And holds my breath tight
Nightmares is all I see
I'm afraid That's the way I feel
You are always my deep thought
My tears run down when I don't even know
And my smile never appears at all
You see that I am happy
But it is not for real
I always laugh...
But no one knows when I collapse
I'm afraid to cry...
No one understands why
I look back at the years
Strange thoughts are always here
I'm afraid of a call...
That brings up something I never hoped
I'm afraid that you are getting hurt
I hate when people call your name
When they talk about you all the day
Convince me of a truth I never believed...
Is this the way LOVE turns to be?
I pray like I never did before
Hope your bad days are gone
And those nightmares have stopped
I don't have enough words to complete...
But forever is what I need...
I know it won’t be
But what is wrong if we believe?
Or even thank god that we can dream...
Though it's hard but we can forgive
it takes time but we can forget how LOVE used to be...




Comments

The following comments are for "Is this the way LOVE turns to be?"
by Yaraz

@Is this the way LOVE turns to be?
Now this is what I call poetry!!!!!
I can imagine the pain you went through...
Life is a bitch, you face a lot of bumpers... but what makes you special is how you get through the difficult times that comes to you.

Again thank you for this poem and I DO hope you publish more poems.

( Posted by: Sami93 [Member] On: December 9, 2010 )

The Way?
It would be a higher rating from myself without so much to digest at one sitting. Nearly all of the content is good stuff nearly everyone could relate to, but there is just too much for one on such a subject.
Poetically, I find this readable, when it is difficult for me to have this level of concentration on any poem, and that is a plus. Still the further I got down the line count, the more difficult it became for me to get it all in. I had to stop and come back later, but it is good stuff.

( Posted by: VeeBdosa [Member] On: December 9, 2010 )

Is This The Way Love Turns To Be
I like the part about the blank page. Seems when we're young all these things happen to us...and it ends with a blank page...or did for me...
Thanks for posting....I do however agree with VeeBdosa, it is very long.....but that ofcourse if entirely up to you....

( Posted by: JetfireK [Member] On: December 9, 2010 )





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