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Tears... filling my eyes
I learn someone saying your name
Someone saying how good you were

Tears... dripping from my cheeks
I remember the way you look, laugh
The way you shine with a smile
The way you redden with a cry
The way you blush when I say something nice

Tears... falling from my jaw
I hear your voice saying:"Sami, I love you"
I see the gleam in your eyes when I open the door
I feel the love when you hug me, hold me

Tears... crashing on the ground
When we used to say good-bye
When we used to say:"See you next week"
But there is no next week now
There is now the last good-bye
The last farewell

Tears... cutting rivers
Your eyes were full with tears...
When you said:"Maybe later we meet"
Your voice full with fear, sadness...
When you said:"Make me proud, Sami"
Tears... crashing everywhere
I miss you
I miss the way you smell
I miss the way you embrace me
I can't pretend, show not my sadness
You left me with a broken heart
My heart is drowning with sadness
But sadness should not win
Sadness should not rule emotions
There is love, hope
Love the people around you, next to you
Hope that we will meet again
Maybe this was for the greater good
So you won't feel pain anymore
I wish you to be happy
I wish that the stars are your eyes
To see the man I have become
The man you left behind
I wish that you will be proud of me
That you will tell the dead:"This is my loving Sami"
I wish... that God would let us meet
Meet in the afterlife, maybe for five minutes
So I could beautify my eyes with your soul
So I could clean my heart with your love
So I could smell your kindness
I wish you are happy now
Because I am, your nightmares are gone
You left the greatest mark one could leave on me
But I wish I had a chance to tell you one thing
A word that is little compared to the way I feel
My way of feeling can't be expressed with a man's words
But yet I will try my best, giving it to you with the deepest feelings
My word for you is "Love"
I will remember your love
I will remember you
You are in me, I have not lost you yet
You live in my heart
Your soul walks with me
You're alive in my memories
And my memories won't die
I will look for you, search every star
To find you, and pay you my respect
Cause you taught me something
And that something is how to live life and get the best from it
That something is how to be good and be treated well
That something is how a man should live a happy life

Tears... dropping slowly
As I say not:"Good-bye"
As I say:"See ya later!"
But now farewell my love
Hope we meet again, someday

Tears... fading
... A smile arouse
And love filled the air
And a new day began.



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The following comments are for "Tears For The Lost"
by Sami93

Tears for the Lost
Thank you for a new perspective on the feelings that reach out when someone that we love is dying.

I particularly liked the ending, "And a new day began".

( Posted by: JetfireK [Member] On: December 5, 2010 )





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