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Barriers, I am left wall to wall.
Pointless, why I must feel so small?
Troubled, nothing less than what you gave.
Angry, cause I know there's love left to save.

If I hadn't cared about you so,
would I remain your number one foe?
I am only trying to save you, see?
if there wasn't a you, there is no me.

Battles, how do I trust myself to last?
Regrets, why do I dwell upon the past?
Alone, a fear I face upon everyday.
And you..how dare you stand in my way?

I am only trying to give,
some reasons to why you should live.
Take some time to think it through.
I'd be nothing, nothing without you.



------
krazi-Renee


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