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As I am sure to go to the heavens
I am sure I don't want to go there without you
I will not die without you
I will not leave you
I will climb the mountains, surf the seas
Fly up the seven skies
I will face my demons
I will face whoever tries to stop me from loving you
I will fight whoever tries to stop me from seeing you




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The following comments are for "I Die With You"
by Sami93

Sami's I die with you...
This is a very determined poem from a very determined young man.

You will however "GO" when the Lord calls you home and not a second beforehand, but you may keep her in your heart when it is your turn and take all the love with you....

Keep up the good work and I look forward to reading more of your poetry. Thank You...

( Posted by: JetfireK [Member] On: November 20, 2010 )

Undercovers
More good stuff, but I feel like this is only a part poem, not quite with an ending? But I can see the "swoon" from it by many-a=girl.

I wish I was young enough to be around to read your poetry when you finally decide that there is lots of wisdom in the old saying that "It's all the same in the dark..." but you are still a few years away from that knowledge, I think. Good luck.

LOL

( Posted by: veebdosa [Member] On: November 20, 2010 )

All the same in the dark?
I don;t know what you exactly mean but if someone tells me this I would think of it as: In the dark we can't compare each others in the way we look and dress.. they are all the same when there is no light. But the difference between us is how we talk and express our feelings to one another...
I don't know what YOU meant in your saying but I do hope you lighten up my knowledge and tell me what it means.....

( Posted by: Sami93 [Member] On: November 21, 2010 )

Babe in the Woods Stuff
Oh my gosh, it might take longer than I thought. Anybody?

( Posted by: veebdosa [Member] On: November 21, 2010 )

10 Foot Pole...
NORMALLY...I would not touch this with a ten foot pole..but there was always a saying for any reason as teens......

"Hey...Cheer Up...they all look alike in the dark!"

To me it means...while our dates may not have been Rob

( Posted by: JetfireK [Member] On: November 21, 2010 )

AAAAAAAAAAA!!!!
Common!!!
Help me there!!!!
What does it mean?!!?!?!?!
Judy get some help!!!!

( Posted by: Sami93 [Member] On: November 21, 2010 )

Short Nights?
All the same in the dark,

Come on, who needs the dark? Nobody looks at the fire when stoking the boiler....do they?

Ivor

( Posted by: ivordavies [Member] On: November 21, 2010 )





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