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Author's Note:
Revised to ensure I meet the requirements of this challenge



Dear Jane,

I write this letter Ďcause Iím not in love with you. Iíve also been unfaithful as Iíve had your mother too. I really sad it happened but I cannot change the past, but my tears are now forgotten as I know Iím free at last.

If you are now unhappy take some comfort in your pain by the memory of our meeting and our trips down loverís lane. Where in me you found perfection and the lessons you did learn that will help you get another,ÖÖ..your libido may return.

If your mum should ever leave you would you please drop me a line. You could live on with your father and I know youíll both be fine. For your mum had more about her and my every need she fed and also Iíd remember you each time we went to bed!

John



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The moment created this second, is a moment that's going to last.
It lives the full spectrum of time, the future, the present and past.
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The following comments are for "Dear Jane Challenge"
by ivordavies

Dear Jane Challenge.
We are now glad you have never been dumped as we would all shutter as we looked at our mother...

Damn Ivor...do you ever write anything that sucks? No...you do not....

( Posted by: JetfireK [Member] On: October 27, 2010 )

stop
Dear Jane,
Why are you making this difficult? Just like you do everything, would you PLEASE STOP responding to my Dear Jane letters?
Love,
John

( Posted by: veebdosa [Member] On: October 28, 2010 )





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