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Knocking on my door
Knocking on the door of my heart
You opened a door, a door of love and hope
You taught me how to love
You taught me how to hope
You taught me feelings I never knew
My heart was new
Now... my heart is like rust
You closed the door I gave you to open
You shut the door I thought you'll protect
Waiting... for someone to knock on my door
My heart's door is waiting
Waiting... for someone to give me her love
My heart's door is waiting
Waiting... for someone to water my heart
My heart's door is rough, crumbled
My heart's door is shut
Maybe for now, maybe forever
But forever my heart's door is waiting to hear:
Knock, knock, someone is knocking on my door



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