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…Long time ago I was living in the dark. I refrain from seeing the brightness of tomorrow. I acknowledged the presence of fear & anguish enveloping my whole being. I know the feeling of being drowned into the deep well of depression, luckily I was able to get out of that place, I was clinging to my “imaginary rope” and little by little I was able to reach the top. 
I had sworn myself never to visit that place again for it can’t do any good to me. It would always bring back the negative thoughts I had…all of them. I tried creating a new outlook in life, that in every fall there is always the chance to stand up, in every tear there is always a time that it dries up without your wanting, that in every throbbing of a heart in pain there will always be… 
…and there was silence. 
…no one dared to tell what lies between the gaps and the silence. Scared to once again fell into that same trap. Scared to initiate the talk and later on discover that you did that talk and he did the walk. Scared to finally discover that you have gone too far with the gap and the other became insensitive about it. 
…But I wasn’t scared to do the talking…yes I was able to talk…to myself. I always end up asking and analyzing things on my own. Realizing what I have done and what has caused me pain. Thinking real hard why such things happened and why. Giving out answers to my never-ending questions. I did most of the talking. At least I never walked out. 
…And I had sworn, never to visit this place again. And I’m back. The same dark, creepy & deep well of depression. I examined the place, something’s missing, I had lost my “imaginary rope”, I began to panic, I began to scream but not a sound was heard from me…I lost it. I lost my chance of reaching out into the open…I guess I’ll be staying here for a while…I hope not too long. I really hope to see my rope. 


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