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Am I alive?

Am I dead?

Why's everything dark?

I can't see

I can't feel I can't breath

Where's my heart?

I can't find it

Is it with you?

You took it away

I have no feelings

I'm left in the dark, while you in the light

Where's my soul?

It's in the drain

Why do I feel sad?

Because you left me

I canít believe you people!

I give you my heart, you steel it from me

I give you my love, you give me hatred

What can I do? To make this go away

I can't kill myself because I am already dead

I can't love someone because my heart is missing

Why did you come?

This is more than I can handle

I can't bear the thought of losing you

You broke me into pieces

No one can ever mend me

I'm like a lost soul

Looking for a way

But there is no way

There is no begging for me to start

I was ended when I saw you leaving

I was dead when you said I don't love you


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The following comments are for "Alive? Dead?"
by Sami93

Sami
I have to ask....Do you write like this because you are living a reality that you have recently experienced?

Worried about you....give us a heads us...You have a beautiful mind and a wonderful heart....need to know....

( Posted by: JetfireK [Member] On: October 25, 2010 )

Oh....
Hey thanks for caring...
i was depressed for like 3 years, it was horrible, but the reason isn't because a girl left me, it's because... let me see how to say this.... heh, i learned from the hard way who were my true friends and who were not, and i saw a lot of back-stabbers in my life, i was lost, i gave to people more than take, i never asked for anything, and always accepted everything, i never had a fight with anyone. and after changing schools lots of friends turned their backs on me, and my new school sucks, but now finally i am better i found the right people...
So don't worry, and thank you a lot for caring

( Posted by: Sami93 [Member] On: October 28, 2010 )





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