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What can I say?

What can I say?

I'm thinking of words

But there are none

There are no words invented to describe you

What I tell you shall be little

I tell you, you are beautiful, then I am lying

Cause you are more

I tell you, you are my life, then I am lying

Cause you are more

I tell you that I am strong, then I am weak

Cause you deserve stronger

I tell you that I am yours, then I am selfish

Cause you deserve better


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The following comments are for "No Words..."
by Sami93

WORDS....
If I had one wish, it would simply be words...
The same words that I have spoken many times before
Though I have never before felt...and they are
I Love You....
Thank you, for I now know how life was meant to be.....

( Posted by: JetfireK [Member] On: November 20, 2010 )





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