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I don't know how to love

I don't know how to laugh

I don't know how to feel

I'm like a rugged stone

Incapable of seeing the good in life

Incapable of seeing how beautiful you are

Waiting the day... when light strikes my heart

Waiting the day... I feel alive

Waiting the day... you enter my life

The day when my soul is between your hands

The day when my heart rest upon you

But yet

I'm afraid to love, cause you deserve better

I'm afraid to hold you, cause I may let u down

I fear you, cause you can destroy me

I fear you, cause you make me vulnerable

But yet you will always have a part, in the core of my heart


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The following comments are for "Fear... Acceptance "
by Sami93

Fear
I enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing!

Dave

( Posted by: HeRoCoMpLeX [Member] On: October 22, 2010 )

Glad
I am glad that you enjoyed it :D

( Posted by: Sami93 [Member] On: October 22, 2010 )

Searching
"I'm at my best when I'm at my worst" - Tim Kasher (Cursive) Track: From the hips

The inner struggle is one of great struggle and heavy cost. When we equate into that struggle, loved ones or perhaps a lover- gee's, how the thing becomes raw and almost unbearable.

Very nice. Thank you for sharing this.

( Posted by: pablowilliams [Member] On: October 22, 2010 )

You'll learn
This was touching, and brought me back to my own experiences in love...
You'll learn how to be you in time, just be patient with yourself. Your writing shows you all ready know this.
Keep it up! you're writing will help you through, it'll show you everything you need to know, and everything you dont want to know ;)

( Posted by: IcicleIcicle [Member] On: October 22, 2010 )

Fear
There is always a fear of the unknown - but we are compelled to seek anyway - and there is always the chance the risk will pan out!

( Posted by: jonpenny [Member] On: October 25, 2010 )





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