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Beauty, love, hope

I don't know what they mean anymore

Sad, misery, hatred

These are what I am now

You where an angel from the sky

Who's sent to me, to love me

But as time pass, you became my devil

My worst nightmare, my soul thief

My heart crusher, my cold heart

I cannot think strait

I hope you go away, away to a place I won't remember you

To a place where I will be happy again

But there is no place for me to be happy

This is who I am forever

And forever I will miss you

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The following comments are for "Love.. Hatred "
by Sami93

food for thought:
when someone we love, decides they don't want to be a part of our life anymore, it is like that person has been diagnosed with a terminal the person begins to decline, they cannot share themselves with us the way they used to. simple tasks become mountains, appetite and thirst diminish, and the person who shared their life with us is actively dying.
We are still here though, our body still has an appetite for life and wants to live, however sad it's existence might be without that person; however resentful they may feel that the person they loved so much has gone.
and you, who still remains here remembering your beloved will naturally begins to grieve-- shock/denial, anger, depression, barganing, and finally acceptance. There is no time restraint for grief, there is no defined order, there is no definite end, but exploring your grief, is a sure way to find an end in "forever".

i hope you dont mind my comments. i've been where you are before, and it was the hardest time of my life as a teenager. i wish only to impart my knowledge to you, so you can explore your potential as a poet. you have great awareness of your emotional state, keep it up.

( Posted by: icicleicicle [Member] On: October 23, 2010 )

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