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This was not written by me, but by a dear friend of mine. I take no credit for this whatsoever! She is very talented, and I think this is a great poem. Share your thoughts on it everyone!


Teddy bear, Teddy bear

With a tear on your face,

I am so sorry,

I am such a disgrace.

Teddy bear, Teddy bear

Sitting all alone,

I had to go,

So I left you home.

Teddy bear, Teddy bear

Arms so long,

I want a hug...

You wonít hug back,

What is wrong?

Teddy bear, Teddy Bear

Turn around,

Touch your head,

Now touch the ground.

Teddy bear, Teddy bear

Run and play,

Why so sad?

I wish your happiness stayed.

Teddy bear, Teddy bear

So soft and warm

Hold me tight,

Keep me unharmed

Teddy bear, Teddy bear

SHHH! Donít tell!

Is my secret safe with you?

Or will you tell?

Teddy bear, Teddy bear

Love me good.

Do you have a heart?

It seems like you would.

Teddy bear, Teddy bear

Say good night,

I will be gone in the morning

I hope it doesnít cause a fright.

Teddy bear, Teddy bear

Miss me not.

My heart beats for you...

And now it has stopped.

Teddy bear, Teddy bear

Please donít cry,

I miss you too.

I will not lie.

Teddy bear, Teddy bear

Donít lose hope,

We will be together again,

I will help you cope.

Teddy bear, Teddy bear

Though my body is gone,

My spirit is with you.

It was time to go,

Iíve waited too long.

Teddy bear, Teddy bear

I miss you dearly.

I love you so much,

But my soul was weary.

Teddy bear, Teddy bear

I know I let you down...

I quit my life,

Now you frown.

Teddy bear, Teddy bear

I send you a kiss,

I hope you catch it,

I know you wonít miss.

Teddy bear, Teddy bear

I will see you soon.

This is goodbye for now...

I love you too...

------
Havoc


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The following comments are for "Teddy Bear"
by HavocTheDemon

Teddy
I liked this - it has a neat lyrical quality. Good!

( Posted by: jonpenny [Member] On: October 20, 2010 )

Thanks!
Coming from you, a compliment on a poem is a high praise. I'm glad you enjoyed it, I also think the lyrical sound of the poem makes it very strong.

( Posted by: HavocTheDemon [Member] On: October 22, 2010 )





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