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it's all fine and dandy
going down at first
but things don't always go
quite the way they were supposed to go
as soon as it's all digested
and broken down into a liquid form.
Sometimes it churns inside of you
and it aches so bad
that you begin to spew all kinds of
nasty things from your mouth
that wouldn't normally come out.
Chunks of unrecognizable funk
go splattering everywhere,
flying in all directions.
Soon, everything around you
starts to stink and rot.
Your carpet gets ruined
and nobody wants to be near you
for a very long time.
That's right,
puke is the epitome of love.

Reverend AntinormalitÓ

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