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Fuckery Duckery Dack.
He's leaving before I am back.
Shudder I, in the presence of Soon.
Way too little giggles. Want to meet him in the middle
but the clock swims away with the moon.







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Reverend AntinormalitÓ


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The following comments are for "~ Shuckery Duckery Damn ~"
by TheTesticularPrancer

Gohst of Socrates
Methinks we have been blessed with the presence of Socrates Quackery, a notable poet of major esteem. Prey tell, give us more befor your next swallowing of hemlock.

( Posted by: veebdosa [Member] On: October 12, 2010 )

?Does It Read Better This Way?
Thank you sir. You've just inspired me. Socrates Quackery is a damn great description of the way I prefer to quack. Those two words combined really send me thinkin' thinkin' thinkin'...

I re-scribbled this baloney, written for a friend who is leaving right before I am returning. I think reads better written this way:


Fuckery Duckery Dack
He's leaving before I am back
Shudder I, in the presence of Soon
Way too little giggles
Wish to meet him in the middle
but the clock swims away with the moon


I don't whatcha think? Certainly nothing special. Just what I was feeling.

( Posted by: thetesticularprancer [Member] On: October 13, 2010 )

Hey Rev!!
Good to see you back...we've missed your gobbledegook brand of (poetry?)!! lol

Stay awhile Preach!!!

Bea

( Posted by: Beatrice Boyle [Member] On: October 13, 2010 )

Thank you, Bea
I wish I could stay and preach, but I'm not sure it's my forte. I've been hopping around with one foot in my mouth for quite some time now. I am WAY out of balance. Feel like I am working my life away here making ends meet. If I'm reading and writing it means I'm migraining and not sleeping. Got to get my head out of this vise. Sadly I'm too stressed to stay focused long enough leave many comments that are genuine. I also think it would be inappropriate to just be an angry brat and post just to post.
Maybe I'll put up some old stuff from back when I was a kid still.
Thank you for your support and much love to you and yours. With your vote I promise we'll send a message loud and clear to Washington stating that we have a loud and clear message for Washington.
This has been The Testicular Prancer and I support this message.
I should really try to think of a better pen name.

( Posted by: thetesticularprancer [Member] On: October 14, 2010 )

@The Rev
Brother Prancer!!!!

Good to see something from you! I loved this bit of "quackery".

(This message has been brought to you by HeRoCoMpLeX. If your going to have a complex...make it a HeRoCoMpLeX!)


Miss you my friend, don't be a stranger! Kick your shoes off and stay awhile.

Dave

( Posted by: HeRoCoMpLeX [Member] On: October 15, 2010 )





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