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Underneath a rolling cluster of gray fluff
The white cotton puffs of summers Passover
Outlines the remaining crystal water in air
The trees are diverse signs of wisdom
Not afraid to wear blonde, auburn, and ash colored hair
Shedding, preparing for the stress
Of the cold, bitter, depression that comes soon
Stretching arms to the sky
At the flaming energy
Barely there

Everything I do, I do with passion. Come join me and see what I can do with words!

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by DBurke

Nice! Liked this one.

( Posted by: jonpenny [Member] On: October 11, 2010 )

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