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I will conquer you
like the sun conquers the rapeseed horizon you once looked to, over tilled earth and a pretense of expanse (you so wanted more),
and I will vanquish reason
it is useless to me now
I will look to your wayward lines (you so loved the physical)
of origin and destination, a drawing once made in permanence like a varicose map
and draw strange conclusions of what might have been;
gesticulated like the spitting lament of a decaying man
my eyes will pierce your skin
and crawl underneath where it is warm
I will take from you all that you need lose so
that we can barter with silence our demise

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by happykafka

Pay it forward.
i find it funny i am about to tell you the same thing someone once told me...and it changed my your words...hate your structure...and I fought this with tooth and nail until I realized they were right...try working in would read better.

( Posted by: mason [Member] On: October 17, 2010 )

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