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She sits and talks of compromise
And shedding
Of ideals
Her perfect teeth strain words from
And her eyes
They do acknowledge, perhaps not resolve
In that fleeting moment
She thought I looked away

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by happykafka

She sits
A lot packed in a few words -I liked this - lucid and economic. Good job!

( Posted by: jonpenny [Member] On: October 3, 2010 )

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