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[A Flash Fiction 55-worder]

TRUMPED

Feeling strange, I awoke in the body of "The Donald." After a shower and shave, an elegant breakfast and a limo ride to his plush Manhattan office, I sat in his swivel chair and watched my old self enter through the polished mahogany doors.

Without pity or remorse, I calmly said to me, "You're fired."

Copyright 2009 by James D. Young


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by JamesYoung

Thumped....
Clever...thanks...more than I was expecting..

( Posted by: JetfireK [Member] On: October 22, 2010 )

You're fired!!!
Laughed my head off James...The Donald couldn't have said better himself!!!

P.S. I wonder if he himself has ever heard those fateful words???

Bea

( Posted by: Beatrice Boyle [Member] On: October 22, 2010 )

Trumped up
Thanks for this, I needed the chuckle.

Bravo,

Dave

( Posted by: HeRoCoMpLeX [Member] On: October 22, 2010 )

Reply
Writers need feedback, pro or con, so I thank all those who took the time last week for this short piece. Re Beatrice's query: perhaps ex-hubby Ivana once told him that? - Jim

( Posted by: JamesYoung [Member] On: October 25, 2010 )





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