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In time all wounds are healed by the sweet mist of angel tears
That God allows falling upon us in our weakest moments of despair
I acknowledge I cannot compete with what our ultimate father has given you
But my flesh mourns thee as we pass through the years

Even when I held my head down, I hear you say "donít cry"
My passion for your existence brings me to my knees
I know you were here, I still feel you like a sweet breath of air
Though- I never doubted my lord I am compelled to ask "Why"?

Sweet angel I once held, I promise to hold again
Our worlds, but never our hearts separate us
This love is great between you and me
So I say see you later for now because this is not the end

A day that is promised when my king will descend
And give me what you have, so I may better understand
In anticipation of that day coming, I will love you from far and wide
A love that will last, until forever ends

Everything I do, I do with passion. Come join me and see what I can do with words!

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The following comments are for "CONNECTED BY LOVE"
by DBurke

I lost a dear friend yesterday and this touches me deeply. Thank you!

( Posted by: jonpenny [Member] On: September 10, 2010 )

To JonPenny
I am so sorry for your loss. I am happy that this poem touched you as it was one of those moments when I poured my heart out and hoped it wouldn't get ripped apart. Though I am late to respond I hope that your heart is healing and I will keep you in my prayers.

( Posted by: DBurke [Member] On: September 26, 2010 )

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