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the sweet blonde waitress
geisha body, sparkly eyes
free salty soy beans

California rolls
I order, with some sweet drink:
my waitresses' fave

the clang of chefs' knives
or samurais in battle
all life is struggle

feasting on the rolls
bamboo plants recall Thailand
Basho eats nearby

order tuna rolls
Kiriban rides down my throat;
more dragon than deer

bill and a good tip
take all my cash; that's okay
my trip to Japan


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