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I'm like one minute love em
And the next I'm like fuck em
I'm a lyrical mayham
and you got nerve askin who the fuck do I think I am

I'm the one you come crawlin to
When shit just ain't goin right
I'm the one who just held you
After he beat your ass last night

Now you're tellin me I ain't actin right
I've lost my fuckin mind, no bitch, I've lost my patience
I've lost all hope, I've lost all faith
At the end of my rope and you're playing with fire

Now run back into his arms
Right where you want to be
Cause the next time you come crawlin
I'ma be spittin on the ground you're walkin
It's gonna be in one ear and out the other
with all the shit you're talkin

I'm like one minute love em
And the next I'm like fuck em
I'm a lyrical mayham
And you got nerve askin who do I think I am

I'm the one who finally got fed up
And you've got me so fucked up
But you know what I'ma keep my head up

------
Kenneth D. Woodard


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The following comments are for "Lyrical Mayham"
by PoeticallyObsessed

Lyrical
Reads like a rap tune. Clear and lucid - cool that! There are some good poetic moments but a little conversational for me!

( Posted by: jonpenny [Member] On: September 10, 2010 )

Thank you
Sometimes, as a poet and a humane my mind tends to wonder. I'm never lost, but am always searching for the right words. And in many cases it takes writing a bad poem to end up with the right words for the next good poem. If you understand where I am coming from

( Posted by: PoeticallyObsessed [Member] On: March 21, 2011 )





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