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Behind the woven tapestry
Frankincense and blood
Rest two noble swords, my love
Sent from up above

What comes next? A mystery
It's gold between the seams
But this moment's sure as shove
Glass clowns defining dreams

Yes, today, I fear my dove
It's needled in the cloth
For, today, it's clear my friend
Our lovers' palms are lost

Impale our hearts, today my muse
Upon these moral blades
For rusty sentiments of lore;
Another Christ crusade

September 1, 2010

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Here, I share, with stark honesty, my life.


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