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I am the soul who guides shepherds away from sheep
The martyr that dries the eyes who weep
I am the fountain that no water will release : thus life nor death doth give,
Not all things unseen are not conceived.

Look to me not, i am the star that guides nor west nor east,
I am the fruit that eve did eat
and with such action sealed her heavenly seat.

I am the heaven for those lost in need of sombre peace
My ardent bosom melts sins from sinners sleep
My womb, the earth where storm and lightning find their ease.

I am the door that confines no thing,
ye who come onto my steps are welcome in.
Open me for love or sin
I accept all souls who venture within





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The following comments are for "Mary Mother of Sinners"
by Shaza89

silver, no stick
Precocious temptress, thy name is Lilith. Your delicious mind entertains such a civilized evil,
yet exudes such a passionate altruism. I am truly intrigued, and thank you for bestowing this work upon us. Also, your comment on "Deadline" was very appreciated. Burn slowly...

( Posted by: metrozol [Member] On: March 14, 2013 )





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