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How was it that I lost my love
for you
my light for you
my care.
I have been looking for them.
The more I looked
the less I found
the less I looked the
more I saw the loss
shattered behind me
in pieces of
tragic emptiness.


------
louis14


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The following comments are for "Pain Management"
by louis14

The end of a love.
The end of love is a pain sufferred by BOTH sides...for one...loss of love is shattering, while the other mourns the loss.

Well done.

Bea

( Posted by: Beatrice Boyle [Member] On: August 15, 2010 )

Pain Management
Thank you Beatrice.

( Posted by: louis14 [Member] On: August 18, 2010 )





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